Zyphonee's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kingdom Hearts Anime pt2]

Not too special

Please excuse me if I tell you I didn't like it too much, the drawings were at some points truly amazing, really good, but in other moments, the graphics were awful. The animation was mainly composed by tweens, but some moments had some FBF, which was really nice, except for the lip sync, which needed more work.
The part I liked less was the voice acting, it needed way more expression. But in spite of all the flaws I have mentioned, it's still a nice movie, and it's awesome to see that somebody makes an animated version of a game!

[With My Mind's Madness]

Awesome, but could've been so much better...

Well, the animation was really amazing, you made some really smooth animations, for example explosions, guys running, and that was really impressive, the art was something that when watching your submissions, I feel like I don't even need to talk about, as your art is probably some of the best on Newgrounds, I specially liked the beautiful backgrounds, like the skies for example. The whole movie itself was an amazing battle, it had all this epic feeling over it, as it had some shots of the character that were really dramatic, I love when authors put effort into making the character look like he's struggling against fatigue, as you did it .
The only reason this wasn't worth a 10/10 is that it looked like it wasn't completed, as sometimes, the characters looked like they need some polishing, specially on the lines, they were too rough. The one part that showed that the most was when Jesus was cruxificated, he had no filling whatsoever.

Other than that, the movie was amazing, and a real shocker because of the animation, the music (I really loved it) and the beautiful art. Keep em' Coming man!

[EgoCity Chap V disk1]

Quick, we need 10 oz. of Wacom, NOW!

Well, let me start the review saying that the story is preety good, the voice acting is actually nice and the animation shows lot´s of experience, but, what's up with the graphics, they need a major improvement. The action scenes were preety amuzing, but I felt like I didn't want to look at the screen while they were talking. Please, improve the graphics and you've got some respectable series.

[Alfred Christ]

That, my good sir, is religious blasfemy

And it is because the bible is nowhere near the awesomeness of this!!!!

[.::Reunion::.]

Lacks something... recognition!

The whole point of the movie was very good, but some moments in the animation looked kind of rushed, specially the FBF, that had a rough look to it, and I dont mean rough because of the style, I mean it because you should've cleared some keyframes and draw the frame again, and some movie clips looked like the movement wasn't finished before the MC looped, but on the other hand, some parts were really cool, like the old lady falling, the backgrounds and the beautiful animations on the animals, but it'd be better if you used the color pallet to make you own shadings instead of using the ones flash already has preset, specially for the grass, leaves and clouds.

Jessismith responds:

Thank you, Zyphonee....:) That means a lot.

I must admit though, it was very rushed; especially towards the end. You're right about a lot of what you said.
I did actually try to make my own shadings. I didn't use flash. I was basically just lazy though. I put a layer of black over the picture. Yeah....it didn't turn out so good.
The grass leaves and clouds. I should have worked harder on those...:P
Thanks buddy...:)

[Metroid Prime Catastrophe]

Cool one!

It´s a preety good movie, I really like the art, but the only reason I take three stars out from this is because the animation was made out ENTIRELY of motion tweens, which caused a bit of confusion,specially when the Samus turned around, else from that, it was preety good, sweet art, and good voice acting, which could've used a bit more of detail, specially Samus's voice.

Shadowii2 responds:

I know what you mean about the animation quality. I tend to use a lot of tweens.
Anyway, thanks for the review anyway!

[The MBLA: Pilot]

Creepy... and hitted the nail!

I must say, this is a very good flash, but also, the script was a bit... I don't know. Anyways, the animation was good and some pieces of the art were very nice. Who cares if people gets offended, this flash is still very good overall, but I wish there were more pedo jokes in it... even more...

Maybe Pedo Bear showing in the van for a second...

[Frost'D]

HAHA, vey funny

Well, it was awesome, but Id recommend you to let loose of so marked milestones, when animating, some drawings stayed still for around four frames, I'd recommend you to add more in-between-frames, that way the animation would be smoother.
Other than that, nothing, just awesome and no, the script wasn't retarded at all, it was actually very good, and the typical MindChamber art, which means, plainly awesome art, actually, the last part made me jump back a bit...

MindChamber responds:

ya I was holding on the extremes longer than I shouldve cause I ran out of time haha. towards the end I was inking over the animatic which usually have volume issues as well. But I had to otherwise I wouldve missed christmas by a week lol.

thanks for the review!

[kat poop]

Less tweens please

Try using less tweens next time you animate, oh, and don't do spam.

Anyways I'm giving you a 1 because of the preloader.

FluffyKat responds:

Suck my fury cock

[There She Is!! final step]

Just...

Urgh, too many words in the dictionary, none fits the awesomeness of this movie, it's really good, URGH GOD! IT'S TOO GOOD!